How to Create Bolder, Jazzier, More Intriguing Email Subject Lines
by Marcia Yudkin
Many of my business clients feel stuck in the mud when it comes to gaining the attention of their email subscribers. They use the same very limited number of techniques, strategies and angles time and time again. They realize recipients on their lists probably feel uninterested in hearing from them, which is but one step short of losing them when they unsubscribe.
If this describes you, try these bolder approaches that arouse curiosity, freshen up your emails and improve both open rates and response - without getting downright silly or harming your business image. Along with each idea, I've provided an example illustrating how you might put it to work.
1. Ask a surprising or provocative question.
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2. Highlight an emotion.
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3. Refer to current events.
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4. Issue a challenge.
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5. Use a line of dialogue.
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6. Provide a specific number (or two).
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7. Confess something.
Most People Don't Realize That We Used to...
8. Present a quiz.
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9. Highlight case study results.
How Cassingham Coffee Won Five New Contract Bids Last Month.
10. Quote a client.
"Tasty. Tempting. Tropical. Tidy."
11. Say what the reader is probably thinking.
Why Won't They Just Tell Me What's What!
12. Guarantee something.
Tougher Exteriors - Guaranteed.
13. Relate to social trends.
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14. Promise to alleviate a hassle.
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15. Compare before to after.
Before: 17.5 Compliance Failures. After: None.
16. Name the exact type of person you're targeting.
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17. Create suspense.
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18. Evoke imagination.
Imagine Every Lead Turning Into Revenue.
19. Use un-businesslike language.
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20. Make a vivid comparison.
Some Days Your To-do List Feels Like Grand Failure Station.
21. Tell a story.
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Want to turn the hunt for livelier subject lines into group fun? Order lunch for everyone in the conference room, divide into teams and see which bunch can create the largest number of subject lines using the list above. Offer a prize for the most ridiculous and the most promising ideas. Then collect all the suggestions and separate them into usable and not usable.
Have another lunch meeting to turn the seemingly unpromising ideas into better, more appropriate ideas. Sometimes that prize-winner of a ridiculous idea ends up triggering a brilliant marketing campaign!
Remember, the goal is to surprise and interest the customer who is wearily going through their in-box. What you'll probably find is that your effort to excite that email recipient ends up re-energizing you about the delights of what you sell.
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